Bad hair day
“Time to get up”, my mum screamed from downstairs.
“Make sure you look nice for photo day”
wait it’s photo day oh no! With a rush I get to the bathroom and and ran to the mirror I have never seen my Beautiful brown hair so messy before. I’m not ready for someone to hold a camera in my in front of this mess. I look back to yesterday from when I was putting the my new shampoo in my hair after, I put my hair curling cream in my hair. Worried I grab my shampoo and read the fine print it said don’t mix with other products!I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying my sentence beginnings and using descriptive language
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