Success criteria
Use a variety of sentence beginnings
Use punctuation
Add adjectives and verbs
Use a variety of sentence lengths Success criteria
I meet my favourite You Tuber!
Ahh what a beautiful day, wait Oh my god is that who I think it is, it’s JAKE PAUL! the fastest growing youtuber, and he’s taking a photo by the train, should I photobomb do you think he will notice me, let’s go for it. 📷 He turns around instantly with a confused look in his eye and he asks me some questions like what are you doing here and why did you photobomb, not the best look when you meet your favourite youtuber. He left soon after and I never saw him again. As soon as he was out of sight I screamed not just because I meet my favorite youtuber also because I might be famous.I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying my sentence beginnings and using descriptive language
Success criteria
Use a variety of sentence beginnings
Use punctuation
Add adjectives and verbs
Use a variety of sentence lengths Success criteria
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